Inside this Man

She tries to see past the hurt and all the wrong things that he's done.

She knows the road won't be easy.

She knows it won't be fun.

She see's the truth in all the darkness,

each moment shines so bright.

Something inside of her says go on.

This something must be right.

She wages the wars and fights the battles in which she has already won.

Just to see his smiling face,

just to know she made him strong.

All of this will someday pay off,

she tells herself deep inside.

Hoping, praying that someday will come,

and his burdens won't have to hide.

It's just the world -

they see, they judge, but they don't truly understand.

What she's doing, what she feels, or what she see's inside this man.

Author's Note

Please be honest, and feel free to share what you think. If you see any type of mistake, please let me know. Thank you.

Reviews

[Joan*Eckhart]

Man, I've been here. This was excellent, well, written, and your message was sent perfectly.

[Ellen Henry]

Thank you! Not everyone can see the diamond in the rut! I am glad that I stuck by mine, he is beautiful!

[MAC]

i am absolutely nobody to judge poetry but as far as i can tell this is an excellent write. it has great flow and a very strong message...doesn't get much better than this.

[Ellen Henry]

Thanks a lot! I truly appreciate that!

[Pale Rose]

Just want to say that this is happening to me right now! I especially like "She wages the wars and fights the battles in which she has already won." Nice write, keep at it!

[Ellen Henry]

Thank you very much! Stay strong. Every storm runs out of rain, and a little faith goes a very long way.

[Pale Rose]

So very true :)