To Say Goodbye

We only meet to say goodbye

To say goodbye, to say goodbye…

And should we meet before I die

I’d have no time to say goodbye.

We only meet to say goodbye

To watch the time just wither and die

If we had meet before I died

I wouldn’t want to say goodbye.

We only meet to say goodbye

So walk away before you cry

For if we should meet before I die

We’d only meet to say goodbye.

 

The fondest words ring in your ears

So let me silence all your cares

Though I am gone, you still live on

And we only met to say goodbye

We only met to say goodbye.

Reviews

[Emerald Seas]

Nicely written.

[Ellen Incognito]

Thanks :D

[Becca Bishop]

Nice job :) The repetition really helps cement the message in. I'd consider changing the "To watch the times love wither and die" line (it's a wee bit long) and maybe break up the different stanzas so it isn't as confusing? Or don't :P Whatever floats your boat.
Love the message in this one!!!

[Ellen Incognito]

Thanks, I'll fix that.

[}Echo{]

I really really like this. This is really cool. It's seems kinda like song lyrics. I really like the theme, and attitude of the poem. :)

[Ellen Incognito]

Thank you :)

[}Echo{]

:)