Dubitable

I was here
Then over there
I thought I could
I didn’t dare
Then it was gone
I wasn’t found
I couldn’t hear
Or touch the ground
Thought I could see
But I was deaf
Next it was clear
Then it was left
So nothing changed
Or stayed the same
And then it went
Around again

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Beautiful couplets Ellemorell. I truly enjoyed your flow on this poem.

[Chris Shaw]

An intriguing write ellemorell that I read several times. Each time I read it I went on a different journey. Gave me a feeling of restlessness and uncertainty. Maybe that is what life is about for many these days. Thanks for sharing.

Chris