That is the sound of speechlessness! wow! Blue was wonderful! Red is divine! The "not scattered" line is a little too wordy for the musicality (my suggestion is to contract and desyllabify a couple of words.....for example to write something like this: "Across bones, and you'll see we're connected, not scattered). This is otherwise....wow! Well structured, well strung.....well freaking done! Much enjoyed this one!
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
I much enjoyed your comments! I definitely noticed the musicality of this piece too. Thank you for y.. read moreI much enjoyed your comments! I definitely noticed the musicality of this piece too. Thank you for your kind comments and everything!
That is the sound of speechlessness! wow! Blue was wonderful! Red is divine! The "not scattered" line is a little too wordy for the musicality (my suggestion is to contract and desyllabify a couple of words.....for example to write something like this: "Across bones, and you'll see we're connected, not scattered). This is otherwise....wow! Well structured, well strung.....well freaking done! Much enjoyed this one!
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
I much enjoyed your comments! I definitely noticed the musicality of this piece too. Thank you for y.. read moreI much enjoyed your comments! I definitely noticed the musicality of this piece too. Thank you for your kind comments and everything!