Point

Sometimes, succinct says it best.

I want a lover

not a life coach.

Thanks.

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Haha This is a fabulous little write! Way to say it like it is...and I feel the place where you are coming from in writing this. Too many people try to change their lovers; mold them like clay into something they are not.

I would suggest:

I want a lover,
not a life coach.

Thanks.

--just a format thing that I think would make this stand out a little more poetically, but I loved it just the same!

[Elleannatasha]

On it!! Thank you ;)

[Jack V.]

I'm sorry this makes me laugh. Is that okay? It's in a good way. I find the humour in most things. But I get the point. Straight and to the point. Good job.

[Elleannatasha]

It made me laugh too... Sometimes all we can do is find the humor. ;)

[Jack V.]

Good. I wrote a poem once, on another site, and titled "A Poem" and in the subcategories went and labeled it, satire, comedy, farce, etc... The line said "This is art." It was intended to make people laugh but it was given serious critique lol. Thanks for the laugh last night.