Rawr!

Out loud is so tasteless, they say.

Spin, spin, spinning...

And so what?! 

Who are you

to tell me 

I can't spin???

Unsavory and in 

the public eye

I spin away

Shouting lucidity

at the top of 

my fingertips.

If I want to 

Live life out loud

I will do as 

I damn well please

even as you 

wrinkle your brow

at the absurdity

and lack of decorum

I choose to wave about.

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

A piece showcasing the strength of human nature. Who is anyone to say how anyone else should act or live? I say, live and let live. I like the power in your words; the way that your emotional character is truly expressed brightly in the lines.

Technically, I would like to see this either spaced as one long stanza (so without the breaks between the lines) or as a couple shorter stanzas (I see some natural breaks)...of course, who am I to tell you how to format it? :) Overall...a huge like!

[Elleannatasha]

Thank you!! And... Haha!!! I did that specifically to be contrary. ;) It needled at my eyes and sense of aesthetic as well.