will you believe the flashing lights?

what would i give for
another day with
the greatest feeling on earth

away from eyes and
loaded opinions
i think i sense a mania

you call me selfish?
you call me crazy
i'd like to see you survive
if you can help me
i can repay you
i need a miracle drug

if i can ask you
will you please answer?
i need to know i'm alright

change my beliefs and
change my appearance
or can i get a new mind?

i know you'd help me get my mind in order
if you just knew what is wrong
but i can't tell you cause i have no words now
so if you can please leave now

oh do you hear me?
will you believe me?
d'you see the flashing lights?

this can't be happening
i know it isn't
will ya just get away?!?

Reviews

[Andie]

no word in this poem would be as strong out of context, but in your words, every line bites.