new lot old not

new lot old not

A Poem by Jake Martin

bring yourself round
right back to the start
you fell of your high horse
because it tore you apart

what's in store for me?
your smooth voice always says
i really hate the way you love
but i have seen better days

better days
are close
not far but
everything lost
its meaning
to the world

© 2010 Jake Martin


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ooh... i like this. a lot.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really love this kind of poetry... Like when you're trying to convery something without being too explicit.
"everything lost
its meaning
to the world"
I quite like that line. It just seems to fit really well...
Andie :D


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jake Martin
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A Poem by Jake Martin