feigning the fear of fleet foxes [blank thoughts.]

control the influence------------>

when you're tripping over backwards

and upside down

your perspective on the world changes

everything is flipped on its head

so to speak

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand yes

 

the doors open and

the doors

they close

for ever and ever if no one bothers to open them

and your speech on the soapbox will be over soon

when the sun is eclipsed by the moon

until the trapdoor of the night

closes

its jaws

 

and they enjoy their art galleries of human suffering

and take you

stuff you in a cage

for all to see and none to remember

but everyone will laugh at the fool as long as it

redirects attention from their own

stupid

neverending

foolishness

...

 

flying around in a drop of water forever

uuuuuntillllllllll it lands in

the

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GROUND.... <!3$@#)(*>

Author's Note

<----------battle the urge

Reviews

[LlamaLord]

I'm not exactly sure what you're trying to get across to the reader. There are some very well written lines and I know there is a single subject, but I have about 5 thoughts as to what this could be about. I'm leaning towards the influence of others and what it does to a person when that person's world is being negatively affected. I'm pretty sure that was a run on.. lol. These are my favorite lines....
"and they enjoy their art galleries of human suffering

and take you

stuff you in a cage

for all to see and none to remember "
Veryy wonderful language here. So creative :D Very nicely done.

-Austin