Rise of the Wind

The alarms rang

Crashing through the towns.

Uprooting fear,

Taking down assurnace

And safety.

 

The little girl ran

With her family trailing.

Only to find later

Her santuary,

Her home

Had gone and

Fallen

With the rise of the wind.

Reviews

[Pencrafter]

This poem, despite being brief, creates a concise, clear story. It could serve as a caption under a picture on a wall. Also, it conveys the emotion of losing a sense of security during storms or other disasters.

[Becky Clancy]

I like it (:

[Gina]

It is so sad. But it is AMAZING.

[Kat24]

this is very interesting. good job!!!

[Bonnie Masters]

Really brilliant poem, really expresses the character's feelings.

[Sleeping Maiden]

A very moving poem! It expresses fear and anxiousness...
how we can lose something in such a short time..
Thank you for the piece!

[Dark Poetry]

A very touching poem, thank you.

[J. J. Nightingale]

AND SOMEONE ELSE'S WORLD TOUCHES OURS .. A LITTLE GLIMPSE OF LIVES ..


JASMINE ..

[Lily Mae]

A powerful write reflective of the storm itself...xo

[pinpen]

This is Fantastic, I really enjoyed this.