Break

I'm at war every day with myself,

For years it seems.

And so I wonder

Do they see?

When they look at me can they see

How weak I can be,

How easy it would be to destroy everything?

Every

Word

Pierces

Me.

Reviews

[i-love-you-boo♥]

This is really nice work, very relate-able.

[Seriana]

I've read a few of your pieces and they're very filled with raw emotion. Alot of times what I read (I feel) is a bunch of fluff and pretty stuff. It's nice to see something different, something raw and true and pretty in it's own right. I also like the brevity of this piece. Sometimes the most powerful things can be said in only a few lines. Nicely done.

[J. J. Nightingale]

I HEAR YOU .. I OFTEN FEEL FRAGILE .. AND I WONDER IF OTHERS SEE IT IN ME ..
WORDS ARE A POWERFUL SWORD, THEY CAN CUT DEEP ..

TAKE CARE .. JAZZY

[CoconutSprinkles08]

It's short, but that only adds to its beauty and strength

[Coffee Vampier]

Aren't we all fighting a war?