Moment

The sun rose again
While there was still frost
laying over the earth like a
Layer of glass shards, glittering.
The leaves matched the sky.
It made me think,
not of you.
But, of others, I might've
Spared a moment's time to.

Author's Note

Thank you for reading. I do not own the picture. Please review!

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

It bring to me sadness, and thoughts, but not for others, for you :) I like much the emphasised verses and the flow...The strange provoking question here, if you think really of "others" in the peaceful image of forest, why still you mention "Y o u";

[E.J. Michalec]

i love this. it can relate to the situations of many and it was beautifully written

[sarah]

This is really great I love the feel of this write! great work!

[the in between]

Winter! It sounds unfininished, but awesome imagery. And for a short poem too. Thanks for sharing you are a great writer of details. :)

[Jazique]

Nice deep short and what could possible be wrong with it as it enters the human mind. Well done with words and the way they described an image so well and interesting.

[Sweets]

You drew an awesome picture of this in my mind :)
Wonderful work!

[DearSweetAgony]

I agree with RJM, but other than that I don't see anything wrong with this write.

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really beautiful with the perfect picture!

[RJM]

Honestly the poem left me with a feeling of something lacking. I feel that you could have added more to what you said, but then again that's just me. Beautiful nonetheless