Scars

About when you really want to say what you think but can't

It's hard for me to focus
With thoughts flying through my head
Desperately wanting out
Wanting to be spoken
But that I can't allow
Because they'd fly straight to you
And attack viciously
Attack you savagely
With swords through your heart
They'd fly right through you
And float free
But they'd do their damage
They'd leave their marks
It would take awhile for the wounds
To heal
And even then
They'd leave their scars

Reviews

[Misty Blue Eyes]

Love this

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

damn that f*****g amazing its like you spoke words from my heart.. weirdd.. hehee great job i love this. i could literally see this happening in an animated way as i read.
awesome work :)

[Jazique]

Nicely done you've change the saying here of "Stick and stones shall break my bones but, words will never hurt me." Thats not the case now a days and you seem to fear your words will hurt other as you are hurt now in heal. It was nice short and simple. You did a marvelous job.

[sarah]

I feel this...wow do I feel this. I feel this far to well I can totally and completely relate beyond words. Words u want to speak but afraid of the damage it will cause. I almost cried reading this great great write