Rain

 

 

She turns away to gaze out the window

As you watch the dull light

From the dreary clouds

Unveil half her face

Her sky blue eyes reflect the day

Hair falls in wisps around her weary face

Her breathing is shallow

But breaks the silence in the room

Then she speaks, her voice high

Like the wind

"It wasn't that bad. . . really."

She glances down, hesitating,

smooths her torn dress

As if that will repaire the damage done

"He didn't mean to hurt me."

She whispers

Then looks at you

Her face hidden in the shadows

Still you can see

The rain pouring

From the sky

Even in the middle

Of the night

Author's Note

I do not own the picture. Thanks for reading, please review. :)

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

It was very romanic beginning and totally unexpected end...:) specially concerning the picture with lovely innocent girl...Rain often means purity..freshness, renewed life, sadness...Again you made nice shot with cam of words :)

[Jazique]

I like that especially the ending with
"Then looks at you
Her face hidden in the shadows
Still you can see
The rain pouring
From the sky
Even in the middle
Of the night"
So great work as to describe such a dreary night of this one girl's thought.

[Magdelena]

Oh wow, this was fabulous. It felt like I was reading the little girl's thoughts.. Wonderful images.. Bravo on this one..

Hugs
Mags xx

[Sweets]

This is so creative.
You made a story out of a picture.
It completely describes the girl in here :)
Great work!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Very good imagery to this sad write! Well written too.

[SpokenWord]

of course I am wondering what happened to the little girl in this poem, I have an idea and I can see the rain is pouring not only outside but also inside of her. I like the descriptive in this poem and the sad undertone how you exposed it to us. Great write about a sad scene.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

cool :)

[Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of..]

I really enjoyed this
It reminds me of my poetry haha
Keep this up!

[Akshat♥]

imagination is really well described here..
enjoyable read..
thanks for sharing it:)

[Daydreamer54]

I LIKED THE IMAGERY, IT paints such a sad image. greaty write! :)