Shooting Star

 

You held his hand

On the beach, water and sand

He looked at you like you stare

At a shooting star

With amazement and wonder

You cry now

Cause he's gone

But yet he's still here

The photograph comes to life

In your hand

A hand that had held his

A picture is a memory

A moment never to be forgotten

Author's Note

Thanks for reading please review and rate. I'm trying to get to the 95% rating :)
(The picture is not mine, I do not own it)

Reviews

[RJM]

Beautiful all these little moments in our lives are so special and that we should always enjoy them no matter what.

[Eternal.Dreamer]

I love this poem because I feel like it's written just for me...some moments in life will never be forgotten. Great writing.

[Brook Hughes]

ooo Alex very romantic. I love it.

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Love it! Awesome job!

[Aggie Skeleton]

This is nice, it's got good ryme.
I could read it all the time.
:)

[Kat24]

Hi,
This is really good. Keep writing. Kat24

[I Am Svetlana]

I don't rate, but i really really like this. I like how in the end, you said a photograph was like "a memory/A moment never to be forgotten? SO TRUE! That's why its' hard to forget someone, whenever you look at the same picture of them...or any picture rather. Once you glance at a simple picture of then, all the past memories return. The memories are always there.