Carry Me On the Breeze

Carry me on the breeze
Far, clear away from here
I'll leave my hopes and dreams
Not to mention sorrows and mistakes
Last in the past
So carry me on the breeze
I will float and flow
Not caring where I go
Anywhere but this town
Right on down to dream land
Just give me your hand
And carry me on the breeze
You want to leave too
It's not a thought that's new
Leave with  me
We'll be free
So carry me
On the breeze

Author's Note

Thanks for reading and please review.

Reviews

[Corset]

beautiful, I've been wanting to escape all judgement and cares and just ride off into the sunset like John Wayne in the cowboy flicks but not alone, with just one other, my other, disappear over the hill like escaped convicts, lol. lovely write, I can relate.

[Kat24]

hi,
this is really good. liked how you wrote it. Kat24

[bluessadmood]

I could feel this ..I could fly with those words..for I felt so light
So carry me away on a breeze..far away from here
Will leave all hopes and dreams,feel so lost with you
I ll float and flow,never caring where I go,anywhere but with you
Carry me to dreamland and give me your hand
carry me on a breeze that whistles just for you and me
this is so lovely in everything ,how i loved this
lovely write..

[Surrealstorm]

I like the repetition of this poem. "Carry me on the Breeze" it's so romantic sounding.
"I'll leave my hopes and dreams
Not to mention sorrows and mistakes"
Don't we all wish we could do that at some point? just let it all go and drift peacefully...Wonderful poem!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Beautifully uplifting piece of work... nicely done.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Oh .. a writing true to my heart and so many others I am seeing! In dark and tough times.. we all want to just disappear.. run.. hide.. be carried away on a breeze. I'll take the carried away on a breeze.. for sure in metaphor.. in writing. We all need a place to escape.. these days.. I am growing in yearning to actually get up and just leave.. just go.. anywhere but where I am. I can honestly relate to this.. that child in me.. wanting to just throw caution to the wind!!! To let the past and mistakes be blown away.. knowing while you will still occassionally think of them.. you won't be reminded regularly by others. This small writing is full of passion.. wanting to do something.. rather than just sit. SItting too still today.. is also dangerous.. no job is safe.. cost of living rising.. maybe it's something people should consider.... must always be 2 steps ahead with whatever makes one happy and careful planning! (for me anyways I have children) If it weren't for my children.. I would have been gone a long time ago!!! =)

[~Shadow Kissed~]

nice totally good :)