Weird

We spoke of some things
other people might not,
revealing insights
others leave to rot,

After a heartfelt laugh,
you looked and said,
we're weird huh?
And then turned red.

I doubt that,
I muttered in reply,
and you stared intently,
as if I just flied.

Well, weird is when,
two people collide,
but this time,
all we did was coincide.

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

ha ha
such a talent, you are!

[Monster ^.^]

Thank you :)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Good read and write.

[Monster ^.^]

Thanks Brandon :D

[Jack Cassidy]

Kooky, didn't let me down. Very concise and appropriate topic. Dug it...

[Monster ^.^]

Kookie? Like Kookie Monster? Hahahaha!

[Toni]

I like it c:

[Marie]

Good thought...people not colliding but coinciding

I don't know about the third verse though.