Under the Giant Tree

There was this time I only held,
a book for things to write.
And there I stayed, so calm and thought
of things that gave some light.

I stayed below the giant tree,
that shaded from the sun,
Oh how I thank that big old wood,
that made it all so fun.

But one hot day, I was so shocked,
a stump is what I saw.
What happened to my best of friends,
I felt my eyes go raw.

What's sad for me is the fact
that may seem trivial to most.
No one noticed that it had gone,
One that saved them from being roast.

Reviews

[sithlordjp]

Strong structure and rythym, and a great read too!

[Baby Ricochet]

Really good rhyming and meter. Outstanding work Monster. "Monster" That's totally cool

[Monster ^.^]

Thanks Rico, I like your poetry as well. :)))