Nextdoor's

Nextdoor's

A Story by Monster ^.^
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The love of your life is so near... yet so far!

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I'm in love.

I'm not really sure how or when it started, but it was probably when she saved me from a huge truck that was about to hit, many years back . Humiliating to be saved by girls, I know, but hey, I don't regret that. Why? Because other than the fact that I still kept my life, I have found a new meaning for it.

Oh, yeah, the new meaning lives next door.

But no, we aren't dating. I never told her how I felt. We were really close, but when my feelings grew, I just... shy-ed away from her. At first, she was alarmed, but soon she just thought I was plain weird. It went on that way, and I was down to just stealing glances at her every time we came out our houses at the same time. 

One day, I heard news that their family was moving. I had to do my thing if I wanted her to stay in my life forever! I skimmed through the net, searching ways to tell a girl you like her. Some were not in my jurisdiction, and some were just plain stupid.

Soon enough, what I was left to do was buy a flower. Yeah, that ought to do it, I had said to myself.

I bought them, twelve fresh roses from the city's famous flower shop. Now, the only thing left to do was confess my feelings.

I walked to their front porch with shaking limbs. God, I gotta do something about this. I was about to run away again when the door creaked open.

I prepared my most adorable smile... but was greeted by a fat and grumpy-looking lady.

"Awww, are those for me?" She said, and grabbed the roses before I could say anything, "I knew the people here are nice! Glad I've moved in earlier than expected! I'm Glenda, by the way. The new tenant!" she smiled, but all I saw was my world going black.

© 2013 Monster ^.^


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as a predominant male i expect u will follow this up with u shagging this glenda, yes?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very good. Lol, at least Glenda is hapy. =)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Monster ^.^

11 Years Ago

Yeah, at least she is! :) hahaha
ha...well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Monster ^.^

11 Years Ago

Thanks! :))
Making your move too late is worse than not making it at all. On the bright side, a lady named Glenda was made very happy.

THis is excelent flash fiction. but maybe it's time for you to try writing a longer story

Posted 11 Years Ago


Monster ^.^

11 Years Ago

Thanks Ma'am! I'll see what I can do :))

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My real name is JS Legara. I'm Male, 18 years of age, taking up Accountancy. I really love writing Short Stories, I like them funny. Since I could make through poetry and stage plays o-kay, I try t.. more..

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