Retorts

Who wins the argument?

I say this, you say that,
Disapproval is your note,
I say that, you say this,
Are we ever on the same boat?

I reply this, you freak out,
I claim that, you contradict,
I deliver that, you don't listen,
I voice this, there's a conflict.

We'll we ever get over,
the misunderstandings we have?
We'll we ever get to be
the pair we started as?

Oh, your retorts are my destruction!
No more, no more!
I surrender, you win!
Don't force it, no more!

Author's Note

Yeah, thanks to an undesirable someone who inspired this poem.

Reviews

[critic h]

brilliantly written. it is one of the best poem you have written. Misunderstandings are there in every house but no one wants to publicize. well done.

[Monster ^.^]

Thank you! :)