Well, That's Life for You Serena

a short story on how Serena's day could get even worse.

Serena always hated Valentines day. Why? To know the reason, one must look back to two years ago... it was valentines day, just like now, and she was then with her very first boyfriend. If you thought their day had gone sour (since we are talking about how she hated Valentines day) then you're right, it did. 

If anything bad could happen, that was probably the worst. It occurred at the carnival, they bumped by chance, Amy, her arch-enemy. Let's fast-forward a bit: Amy seduced boyfriend, boyfriend dumped Serena, Amy turned down Serena's Ex-Boyfriend. Sweet? Not for Serena.

So back to now.

As said, it was Valentines day. She was riding a taxi to... well, you must have guessed, the Carnival. Why she wanted to go there? It was probably to celebrate her first heart break... not something everyone would do.

Before she got out, she saw something from a distance. What did she see? Or, who, for that matter? You probably guessed that right too. It was Amy. But she was not alone. She was with someone who seems to be her boyfriend.

"Hold on a minute," she told the taxi driver. She looked closely at the guy, and what the ****, it was her ex. Well, isn't that lucky?
"Can you hit them at full speed, Mister? I'll pay you triple."

Reviews

[KeeD]

Lol I like your art of story telling, it's like come on get the guitar out, drinks out sit by the bonfire and lets listen to a story by Monster o.O, sorry I don't know your name :D Lol
I wish I visited more carnivals now.. I might have actually ended up with a Serena since she and me have a lot in common like getting fucked over :P

[Monster ^.^]

Hahaha! my initials are JS by the way :))) and thank you for liking my stories! I am really glad you enjoy them :) ...

[chaotic katie]

I enjoyed this peice, especially the ending. XD

[Monster ^.^]

I'm glad you did :)

[chaotic katie]

:)

[Marie]

This is funny, and good. You see--you can write short stories. And if you're this good at 18 you might be publishing by 25.

[Monster ^.^]

I... don't know what to say, thank you, thank you very much! :)

[Toni]

Oh wow, hehe, very nice way to end it :P

[Monster ^.^]

hahaha, seriously? just kidding :) Thanks :)

[Toni]

Yeah, seriously :P
You're welcome, it's always good to read your works :)

[Monster ^.^]

Thanks :)

[Toni]

Anytime (:

[critic h]

haha

the true story of every girl.

something that everyone would like and should do.
its more of a comedy than a tragedy!
lolz........

[Akira Kodama]

Stop spamming with two reviews.

[Monster ^.^]

Considering the way I narrated and the last line, I did intend it to be a comedy, thank you :) A Comical drama, if you may :)

[ganga ramesh]

you are a genius that can bring smile to everyone's face..... (Y)

[Monster ^.^]

Thank you ganga Ramesh! I really appreciate that! ... you might want to make your own reviews than commenting on others' though... it might call their attention, and well, disturb them with our conversation :)

[ganga ramesh]

fine...sorry :)