Buoyancy

Desire: Understood.

Behold: Darkness,
Eminent cruelty: specific to man.
Problem? No desire for change.
complaint: No change.

Desire of many: unachievable
Desire of the cruel: reachable
What is man? Unknown
What is known? Man.

Danger, specific:
Man equals an Island.
Source: Misunderstanding
equivalent solution: trust.

Problem scarcity: Never
Cause? want of power.
Reason: too worldly
Answer: Buoyancy.

Reviews

[Chris]

"Serious" is what we each decide upon. A "project" checklist transcribed upon an excell (NOT a typo) spreadsheet. Labels to define perceptions. Perceptions to be refined into labels.

[Monster ^.^]

I see, :) well, this is serious enough for me :) thank you for reading it anyway :)

[Chris]

I didn't diss you or put you down... and I commented because it was worth speaking about. Here it is Sunday morning - before 9AM. I'm sitting with coffee and listening to YOU because I want to - not have to.

[Monster ^.^]

Ah, of course... what I actually meant was that, I usually write children stuff, so it pretty much is my first try to make a "serious" type. :)

[Chris]

JS, "serious" = whatever really matters to us, something that we feel somehow "defines" us as the person we are. Be you... not what you want to think you are. You gave a good and solid view in the above work. Try to give your best in EACH work.

[Monster ^.^]

Yes, I'm going to try, thank you sir :)

[Devanshu Rajput]

great poem...wonderful read...beautifully executed...lovely piece...keep writing.

[Monster ^.^]

Thank you :)