Waiting for Your Message

Don't panic! Stay calm until you know :)

I hold on my phone
waiting for your reply,
But what's taking so long?
I need to know why!

Did I anger you because
Only by message I confessed?
Won't you reply because
You don't want to hurt me so?

Well, I'm prepared for the worst,
Give me your best shot!
Well prepared even before,
I pressed the send button,

Don't hold back!
Reject me if you must!
It's better that I know,
than knowing not what you know.

And at last, I receive it,
and read it with with shaking hands,
I read it twice, read it thrice,
I just couldn't believe it:

"I love you too,
signal just came back."
Oh, stupid me! I laughed and cried with Joy!
I was panicking for naught!

Author's Note

This didn't happen to me :) I just wanted to show how our expectations are sometimes wrong... The inspiration to this... is the lack of signal right now :)

Reviews

[The dark story]

oh it's great...i know how it actually does feels...it always happens with my exams..when i expect to be getting average marks i score the highest..and when i am confident that i will score great..i end up making silly silly mistakes!like reading the question wrong)..."sigh" that's how life is i guess...unexpected!!..but i guess this is how it should be..otherwise there would be no fun...thanks for the excellent poem and to be honest..that very last stanza made me to burst into laughter...truly awesome!!

[Monster ^.^]

I'm glad you like it :))

[Toni]

I love this, it's a hit of reality, can't say it has happened to me, but I know of people that it has happened to. Nice Job c:

[Nithin Purple]

wht hp you??

[Monster ^.^]

Thanks Antonette! :) I'm sure you'd say it in a poem than in a text :)

[Toni]

You're welcome, anytime! c:
I might, hehe. But, I think you did it justice. (:
You're a great writer.

[Monster ^.^]

Aww, thats too nice of you, thanks :)

[Toni]

It's true... You're welcome (:

[Monster ^.^]

You are one too you know. Ive read some o f yourwork and they are a calm to my mimd. Simple yet powerful :) id like to read if you have poems that re funny as well :)

[Toni]

Thank you so much. That is so nice of you to say (:
I do have some funny ones, but I guess I don't put them up because I don't want people to think of my writing as a joke, because it's a very serious thing to me... But, I guess, maybe, I could show you a few c:

[Monster ^.^]

Thank you :) you should know to never underestimate comical ones... Having written in as a joke and having to write one is a differrnt notion all togetjer. The latter being more difficult :)) but i trust that you could pull it off with your skills :)

[Toni]

You're welcome c:
I know not to, but the ones that are rather comical are things about, Gummy Bears, "Guyliner", or Sunburns.
That's why I chose to not put them up, because of it.
And all of those were requests from my friends, they say I write too seriously, I don't know, though.
Thank you c:

[Monster ^.^]

Haha! Id check them out some time :)) ... Whatever topic it is, a good writer could always make it sound good ;) remember that.

[Toni]

I shall remember that, thank you (:
That makes a lot of sense.

[Monster ^.^]

Indeed :) a friend told that to me see... :)

[Toni]

Ah, hehe.
I will remember that forever, probably.

[Monster ^.^]

Good :)

[Salar Majak]

LOL i really love this! to be honest i wasn't expecting the ending! this is beautiful, meaningful and absolutely funny all together! great job!

[Monster ^.^]

Glad I made you laugh :))

[Salar Majak]

:D

[Monster ^.^]

Have you read my "Apartment 10"? I'm sure you'll like it if you like this one :)

[Salar Majak]

yup i read it and loved it and commented on it :D

[Monster ^.^]

I noticed that too just after i sent this hahaha, sorry for that :)

[Salar Majak]

:) it's ok

[Jack...]

It has happened to me...nice job.

[Monster ^.^]

Thank you :)

[critic h]

i like it

[Monster ^.^]

Thanks :)

[Ambereen]

Oh dear this is awesome .....Confessions by sms... I am glad you got your I love Too....

[Monster ^.^]

Thank you! I am also glad my character got their love :) Honestly, I've never done that :)

[Ambereen]

:)

[Ambereen]

you gave me the wise crack to do so though ... may try this one

[Monster ^.^]

Hahaha! expect the unexpected ;)

[critic h]

lolz...

i know that feeling

when god created earth even he didnt know that he will create a perfect masterpiece
man

[Monster ^.^]

Yeah! I retired from making the book, and turned it into this :3