Confusion and Doubt

You can get confused... you can doubt... but make sure you make a sure choice sooner or later :)

I walk alone in a corridor,
The lights are blinking furiously,
how I got here, I don't remember,
All I want is to get out.

But alas, as I enter random rooms,
I seem to go deeper,
more lost than ever before,
more confused than I was.

Time is running out,
I must escape this illusion,
This illusion I created,
Out of my own doubts.

Tick-tock, tick-tock,
a clock sounded from the next room.
A scary sound, a warning note,
Yet, this time, I enter without hesitation...

Reviews

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

Nice one indeed!
but I have one remark
'I walk alone in a dark corridor,
The lights are blinking furiously,'

dark corridor and blinking lights = awkward!!

Should read the sonnet just wrote, has the same feelings

[Monster ^.^]

Don't you mean scary, and not awkward? haha, has different flavors to them... or did you mean the way I wrote it is awkward?

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

I meant it sounds odd, its a dark corridor how can lights blink!!
The image that this one draws in not clear and contrary

[Monster ^.^]

True... let me, adjust that...