Starlight Wonder

so, I was inspired by jamesmiles writing, so I tried to write my own Tanka poem. since its my first one, I have to admit its not all that good

Crystal clear fire

The sky shooting across land

Glittering sparkles

An endless night of glory

All the stars shining above

Reviews

[bonbon7810]

i like it liz

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Very Kool Starry Picture You Have Painted!!!!
...really--there is a tranquil-mood here!!!
...a short and sweet-"Wonder" of a poem:-)
...I love it...

james:-)