Matchless Shock.

Paper-thin skin

and

bold blue marker veins.

 

Freedom in a mop of curly hair

and

            desire in every fingertip

and

curiosity in every tiptoed step.

 

A whisper for a voice

and

butterflies for eyelashes

and

clockwork as a heart

and

strong ropes as bones.

 

all working together to form

a collection beauty;

the abstract art of a person

 

we’re wired with unique electrical cables

each body gives off its own distinctive, matchless shock;

the abstract art of a person

 

Reviews

[Anand Sehgal]

A whisper for a voice

and

butterflies for eyelashes

and

clockwork as a heart

and

strong ropes as bones.

wonderful images. you almost painted the metaphors :) ) loved the write
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[mess of gorgeous chaos]

why thank you :)

[Justin]

i wish i was this intelligient. every time i try to use metaphors like this i end up writing about polar bears

[mess of gorgeous chaos]

haha well the more you try the better you'll get, so dont give up :) thank you for the review :)