Painted Mess

what happens when muses touch?

My thoughts so effortlessly flow

From this canvas of skin and bone.

Prolific emotions,

Colors from the pallette of my soul.

 

My guiding spirit so tenderly waiting

For my painted mess to drip on their skin.

Deep azure gazes,

Unlocking the shades from within.

Author's Note

This was called something else, changed it a bit, now I wuvs it. Just some heart felt words for my muse.

Reviews

[None]

I wuvs this, too! Honestly, the whole theme and how you display it is pure art! "Prolific emotions,
Colors from the pallette of my soul."...such beauty in your poem. You may want to change the title again to "Painted Masterpiece" hahaha. I read your profile and I understand where you get "Painted Mess." It's all good and love your art, especially the hand/heart drawing you did. Your art spills over from words to a beautiful creation in this poem. A favorite!

[Tania Leigh]

"Colors from the pallette of my soul."

Some excellent metaphor in this poem. I love the title, the description, the poem...everything!
Very nicely done :-)

[Olivera]

Your poem strikes me in three levels - one is that I like it as a poem, second that I like it as "High Goth" poem, and third concerns process of painting. (I'm painter myself).

[Not Afraid of Bruises]

simple, and great. I wouldn't suggest you change a thing - well written :)

[Bubo]

This is stunning, reminds me so much of two souls who entwine in glorious colour,
such romantic thoughts and delicious images........being a painted mess probably sums me up!
But with my muse the colours are wonderful...............

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

A wonderful write with great imagry!

[An Ordinary Woman]

Very eloquent and thought provoking ... a wonderful metaphor and it reads so beautifully

My favorite parts:

My thoughts so effortlessly flow
From this canvas of skin and bone... This just grabbed me right from the start, i love it, excellent writing!

[Nicholas Hallows]

I love your painted mess. It is beautiful as are your words. From one muse to another x