Painted Mess

what happens when muses touch?

My thoughts so effortlessly flow

From this canvas of skin and bone.

Prolific emotions,

Colors from the pallette of my soul.

 

My guiding spirit so tenderly waiting

For my painted mess to drip on their skin.

Deep azure gazes,

Unlocking the shades from within.

Author's Note

This was called something else, changed it a bit, now I wuvs it. Just some heart felt words for my muse.

Reviews

[None]

I wuvs this, too! Honestly, the whole theme and how you display it is pure art! "Prolific emotions,
Colors from the pallette of my soul."...such beauty in your poem. You may want to change the title again to "Painted Masterpiece" hahaha. I read your profile and I understand where you get "Painted Mess." It's all good and love your art, especially the hand/heart drawing you did. Your art spills over from words to a beautiful creation in this poem. A favorite!

[Lily1111]

"Prolific emotions,
Colors from the pallette of my soul"

What an incredibly visual descripton of emotion! So well portrayed that the reader could almost see the colors of your aura flashing as they read this poem. You possess a wonderful gift of imagery and artistically use it well to make this poem come alive. Well done!

[Nicholas Hallows]

Now we know what happens when muses touch. I think it's time for a sequel. Love you x

[Brenda Sue]

So very pretty. Wonderfully penned. Great job.

[Sarah]

This is very pretty! ^_^ I love the idea of yourself becoming a canvas of skin and bone, that is eventually painted with the emotions and "colors" from your soul. That's gorgeous and very unique. Great job!

[Claudia MelGregory]

It's a pleasure to read your words .. honestly and I think I've said it before, it's like an expressive painting. The visual of paint in a myriad of colors, blended, different shades and hues dripping from spirit to flesh. It is stunningly visual, sensual and such a sacred image. I love it too.

[Robert Luna]

Made me think of a tattoos in a weird kind of way but that is always a happy thought to have if you ask me. I truly think your words were beautifully written and convey a feeling of connection and spiritual awaking. This was perfect.


Great Job!!!!!!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Very sweet and passionate work... a muse is a wonderful thing!!

[Y.F.]

I love the imagery you've created - I can almost touch it.
I don't really remember the original, but I'm pretty sure I've read it.
The world could use some more of your painted mess.
Thank you for sharing. :)

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Mmm, this is a wonderful poem. I really like this, awesome write!!!

Heather

[Kara Emily Krantz]

love the ending. the title is great.

'Colors from the pallette of my soul."

beautiful job. really not much to say. the length is perfect, and the images, and the title, and the whole bit. :)