Energy

More lyrics for a new techno tune

Floating on Plasma Chaos thru the shadows of your soul

Does energy exist simply for the ones that chose to see

Like zephyr whispers in the midnight air

Bring balance to your being

Looking to the stars from the depths of your emotion

Even there, light shines on the unknown

Where hopes and dreams lay dormant

Let Energy flow

Reviews

[Y.F.]

There's something very soothing about the imagery you present us with here.
As I see it, it speaks about a connection between two persons, which is beyond the physical plain.
Very descriptive imagery, with a nice flow to it.
I might dance to this type of techno tune under the right circumstances , though I'm a terrible dancer.. :)

One thing I've noticed though, which is probably just a typo - 3rd line near the end, if I'm not mistaken, "one's" should be "ones".

Great write.

[shadadakiya]

that was awsome i really like it good work

Energy as a flow. Very Zen, and interesting.

Good read.

[An owl on the moon]

A strong sense of movement with this piece, floating and moving through space and time. So fluid and powerful. Would love to hear the music when all is at rest!

[Mr. Deft Diction]

I'm diggin' those lyrics. Is this something that you do often? You got albums that you've worked on? This was a nice, quick hit.

[Abby]

Wow, that's very nice! Love the lyrics.

[Nicholas Hallows]

More inspiring lyrics! I know that we can both bring balance to each other's beings. Our hopes and dreams are no longer dormant but sprouting roots and branches in all directions. x

[poetsblade]

Chaos, Energy, and balance....good sense of contrast and completion.

[Brenda Sue]

Very beautiful. Great write.