Unsuspecting Rush

Unsuspecting Rush

A Poem by ELii

Life can limit and then it can be limitless
When do we stop stressing and just go for it
Taking risks can be a thrilling and scarey at the same time
Excepting that the past cannot be changed, but the future can mean change
We learn and let go
Following our hearts sometimes
And following our heads most of the time
Thoughts can get in the way of what we really want "our passions"
So let go sometime and just feel
See if your day is any different than any other day
give to someone what has been instilled in you
And most definately cherish others
An unsuspecting rush of kindness can go a long way

© 2010 ELii


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very very nice. I like the way you speak to all without rhyming words but matter of fact. well done.nice message.thank you for sharing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I absolutely love this side to your person. The way you see life has always been an inspiration to me.

'An unsuspecting rush of kindness can go a long way'. reminded me of this quote:

'Each smallest act of kindness reverberates across great distances and spans of time, affecting lives unknown to the one whose generous spirit was the source of this good echo'.

I definitely believe you have one of these generous spirits. x

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great advice. Live your life. You never know how long or how short of time we have here. I say make the most of what time you have. Do the things that make you happy and enjoy the fruits of your labor. If you wish to be really happy you have to be able to let go and love others and share yourself with all you come in contact with. Do what you can to make the world a better place and I think you have the right thoughts as you have expressed them perfectly here.


Well Done!!!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 12, 2008
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ELii
ELii

Chattanooga, TN



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