The War of Time
A Book by Elise
 A nation is crumbling as time passes. It is up to one single girl to save what remains of the Earth. But in the shadows, evil waits for her to stumble.  © 2012 Elise
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Please tell me what could be improved, ideas for any future chapters or any viewpoints you have!
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That's an attention-grabbing title. Good start. Keep the first few paragraphs action-packed, with mysteries or questions posed, and good character and location descriptions. This will entice the reader to want to experience the whole chapter.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Sounds like an interesting book and I'd love tor ead it. msg me when you have the first chapter posted! I like the book cover by the way! ^^
Posted 12 Years Ago
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is it me can't see anything or is it you haven't added any chapter yet?
Posted 12 Years Ago
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EliseÖrebro, Närke, Sweden
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Hi! I'm Elise, I'm 14yrs old, a Chrisitan and a people-person. I love writing, chatting, church, my friends, Mac, horseriding and fantasy. I live in Sweden. more..
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