Vanquished

No need for one...

William was a man

who wore the crown of King

and I curtsied

eyes downcast,

… do as you will with me.

And as with all Kings,

William conquered me.

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[Gee]

OR.....
And as I knelt,my eyes downcast,
his armour started clanking,
a shock I got when looking up,
for William was w#!:ing.
"My liege please let me be of use,
I have just brushed my teeth,
pray let me blow upon your bone,
to provide you with relief"
So being governed by his knob,
he nodded his assent,
I blew and blew with all my might,
until my liege was spent....

[Elise Anton]

Oh my, that's the best collaboration I've seen! Hilarious - well knowing its you Gee - may I say typical but still very funny lol! Can I review your review and say well done, thanks for sharing? It must be that kind of day today, or is it night where you are? Hmmm

[Richard Patrick]

you should be free to do as you will. you are a human, we have free will, we decide to do this or that.
you must find the strength to spread your wings and fly, my bird, fly so high you are free, no chains can hold me, If I am free, believe in who you are? Be free smile the while you unbind the shackles that hold thee to this earth,

[Davidgeo]

Is it supposed to be erotic?

It is but one of the tags is loss....

Eh, it almost gave me a boner anyway.

Kinda short and no real action.

I would predict most new age feminists would take issue with the subservience.

[Elise Anton]

New Age feminists can read something else methinks. Did I tag loss? My bad, I have this whole scroll down tag thing and I must have not paid attention. Erotic? if you're into that kind of imagery, go for it. Almost? Shame.

All it was... I knew a William. Made me think of William the Conqueror. The rest as they say... is history.

[Elise Anton]

Oh and thanks for stopping by and reading. Manners!

[Davidgeo]

You're welcome. Manners are for p*****s.

[Elise Anton]

Exactly. Oh I have to enter more characters.