Be warriors you and I

the fight for freedom from all kinds of pains, written when I was 17 and never forgot it

Be warriors you and I and fight for total consciousness

 

Energetically alive and glowing

 

Like a bubble

 

Rising from deep water

 

Bursting through the surface

 

and floating away free

 

with an irrepressible will to live

 

forever

 

And to not die

 

but explore

 

brave

 

new worlds

 

beyond.

 

 

Reviews

[Zap-the-awesome]

Star Trek!!! Hahahaha. I'm sorry ( kind of) couldn't help myself.

[1 Deep]

Simple write, more description and imagery could have helped me to feel it.

[eliasstone]

Thanks.

[eliasstone]

its not supposed to be very deep.

[.]

At least it doesn't rhyme

[HChase]

i like the simplicity. You've said alot in so few words