Fly Too Close to the Sun

Be careful up there
With your head in the clouds
You'll fly too close to the sun
And come crashing down

You may fear the ocean waves
The blue skies seem like a better place
But it has its woes as well
Careful, or your wings might melt

Author's Note

I know that the stanza is probably off, but I think it's pretty okay

Reviews

[Bransun Mitchell]

this reminds me of a greek myth of a man who made wings from wax and feathers. I find it quite fascinating how you can put that imagery in my mind. A real treat.

[Faith Williamson]

Yeah, that's what I was going for :) The story of Icarus, but related to getting ahead of yourself, whether it be in love or just your emotions causing you to make a hasty decision. Thank you for the review :)

[Bransun Mitchell]

Sure thing :)

[Peter Rogerson]

Yes, it,s pretty okay. Maybe a bit more than that.

[KingJoseph]

I like how it was written actually!