Disgruntled

A lock of hair

Pile of nail clippings

My severed foot

My dripping heart

 

How much more do you need of me

 

My unending care

Total devotion

My love

My life

 

What more do you want of me

 

Nothing but a shell

No light in my eyes

My soul ripped out

Tossed into hell

 

What more can you take of me

Reviews

[Matthew Kult]

I like this, but I can't put into words why so much. Grabbed me. Well done

[Colleen]

Very dark...clearly speaks of anguish...good work