Soar

Soar

A Poem by PaintingWords
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Just a quick poem I got inspiration from a hawk flying across my house.

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I soar
Over clouds
Ducking in the endless breeze
I see the emerald green of the fields below
While I soar
The wind buffets me and I tumble in the sky
One flap of my long, long golden feathered wings
And I am up again
Soaring through the forever blue of the sky.

Twisting and turning
Ducking and flapping
I am an acrobat of above

In the distance I catch a glimpse
Of the glistening sea
I look, and I see
Ruby red monsters diving in and out of the sapphire blue liquid
Pearly haired mermaids lying on metallic sun baked rocks

And I wonder
As my silvery tail flies behind me
Do I belong here?
Am I really one of these creatures that are proud
And selfish?
I wonder.
Then I realise
No

So I soar back through the clouds
And land on a lush green lawn.
And then I am a bird again.

© 2014 PaintingWords


Author's Note

PaintingWords
honestly just a quick poem sorry for the bad quality :P
constructive critisism still welcome though ;)

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what beautiful imagery!!! so nice...

Posted 10 Years Ago


PaintingWords

10 Years Ago

wow thanks :)

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