THE EYE OF THE TIGER

On skill and tenacity. Human vs Animal. The hunter and the hunted. The keen observer!

                            THE EYE OF THE TIGER

Beset by extraordinarily rare moments

     the hunter seeks his reward

The thrill of the chase is paramount ~ 

      although survival plays its part

Sharp eyes, fixated on a prey ~

         he utilizes his skill

Witness the elusive, fleeting moment

as he moves in for the kill ...

but the hunter remains the hunted by

'trophy hunters' who kill at will.

The Bramer/Sheba scenario are the

binding threads of our echo system.

They support intrusive visions of

existence on this planet....

but what is the formidable conclusion of it all?

Viewed through the eye of the tiger ....

" Oh misty blue ~ show me what makes

     the perfect world for me or you?"

Created @ 5.00 pm on Monday 28th January 2019

Author's Note

A one off ~ first this year.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

' The Braemer/Sheba scenario are the - bibding (?) threads of our eco system. - They support intrusive visions of existence on this planet...._- but what is the formidable conclusion of it all?'

I need please, to understand where those five lines come in the tale about hunter and the hunted.Maybe its' too early for me, or, more than likely, those words are just too complex for me to understand. So want to understand, Kitty. If your prefer to answer by messenger box, so that others can draw their own concolusions, i truly understand. Em

[kitty]

Keen 'eye' of Emma. Am grateful for all corrections. All spelling mistakes - oversight = Bramer/ Sheba. 'Bidding'. Conclusion is that we all depend on each other (animal/human) to exist. In my pieces I tend to come up with words/statements i can't always back up with factual explanations but put them in anyway to provoke/evoke some form of response. I am satisfied that you are on the ball. Please forgive any confusion but as an ex teacher I often do that to see what response I get! Hope this explains the 'nutty teacher' scenario.

[emmajoy]

Not at all 'nutty'! Aim, usually unsuccessfully, to learn something new every day. Consequently, what you've said has really caught my interest. Will mull over your words, perhaps leave you a hint of thought, opinion, etc. (My brother's a teacher, am used to this and that!!! :) )

[kitty]

U have now become that special 'friend' someone I can count on to put me straight! Thanks

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

The hunter and the hunted, you focused on them nicely in a fine awesome poetic way, I can picture it. Kudos.

Plz Pleez do comment/review my newest poem too, on llamas

[brokenwriter]

wow this so freaking good. you have talent

[kitty]

I humbly and graciously bow to your applause and thank you for looking in!

[Chris Shaw]

Hello kitty. Good to read a new poem from you. I do not like the hunter moving in for the kill. Especially when it comes to beautiful animals under threat of extinction. We should look after what we have. Your poem is thought provoking.

Chris

[kitty]

Facts say that many of these beautiful animals are going into extinction because of these mindless hunters who kill not only for glory but for greed in the riches it will bring. Some in ignorance or necessity kill to sustain themselves.

[Neville]

I am well and truly on the side of that beautiful striped big cat... an intriguing write and I am more than happy with my interpretation.... All Good Things and welcome back.. N

[kitty]

Glad you enjoyed my simple write.Thank you for your support.

[Neville]

my very sincere pleasure...

[Einstein Noodle]

like many, i have a deep respect for the "Tiger" ... as well as many other "dangerous" animals ... i especially like your poem's call to see through those predator eyes .. i immediately have in mind the Bengal Tigers ..near extinction (only about 3900 left in the wild) they are highly protected ... poachers do take them (if they can) at will ... as opposed to trophy hunters who may not hunt them legally .. i don't agree with most trophy hunting ... like .. why on earth would you want to shoot a Zebra??? unbelievably they do >;/ ... much of the game that trophy hunters kill ... provides meat for the nearest village ...and work for the guides, those that run the lodges, porters, etc. etc. laws are in place internationally to protect those seeking ivory ... or any endangered species ... poachers are many times the inhabitants of the land supporting endangered species ... i especially appreciate your closing verse ... its engaging and deeply seated in the connection we all should feel with our fellow animals ...something civilization has rendered all but extinct says i :(( for a "one off" your poem is hard hitting ...love being drawn in and taking the Tigers eye as my own ... i think the poachers are the bad guys ;) not necessarily "trophy hunters" ... oh the "misty blue" ..if we could only see through them ... we sadly are blind to our natural connection between each other let alone with "all thing" ... :( strong social heartfelt commentary kitty ... and the cat a perfect vehicle for your "voice"
E.
ps. i could not find anything on the "..The Bramer/Sheba scenario.." need some enlightenment :)

[kitty]

Thank you for 'reading' me and for such an indepth review. Much appreciated, EN. giving me a different or should I say a more 'open' view of our connection with animals and nature. The cycle of existence has to go on in the name of survival, and the fittest do survive. Dont worry about the Bramer/Sheba thing. It was something I heard mentioned in the past and used it to draw attention. Ancient tribes and some sort of mombo jumbo used it to appease their gods. Thanks once more!

[Einstein Noodle]

sounds interesting ...i think i will look a bit more for it ... peace and joy always!!

[kitty]

Thanks for being a source of factual information. Am grateful.

[Stella Armour]

Oh Kitty, my muse has been gone for about a year , fickle things these muses lol.

Now please forgive my ignorance but what is the" Braemer/Sheba scenario "?

[kitty]

Ignorance is bliss! To do with some ancient tribe. have not researched - time forbids so it has to be ficticional. Believe it refers to some ancient Asian tradition to do with nature. A matter of 'give and take' rewarding the gods of nature. I jot a few words down promising to go back to it. Inspiration's gone ~ 'with the wind!'

[Stella Armour]

well it sounds not unlike karma, look after the universe and it will look after you....

[kitty]

You've got it!

[Stella Armour]

It's true !

[Rye]

I am not good at constructive criticism, But I do like your write, I thought it was intriguing and interesting. Nicely written....

[kitty]

Thank you Rianna for viewing and commenting on this simple piece. We thinnk of the 'Cycle' and are amazed!

[kitty]

Please feel free to offer constructive criticism as my muse took a short break from me.