wonderfully written dear Kitty, and You brilliantly spotted on the reals to pave the way for light to come across Your words, step by step, from the confusions into the solutions, from the wise spiritual You, I wouldn't expect less! of course Your last verse is the best, speaking the ultimate continuing truth, lighting faith and hope firmly. this world needs more persons like You*
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Funny you should say this. My son has said the God might be a 'she'! The unbeliever! Thank you so mu.. read moreFunny you should say this. My son has said the God might be a 'she'! The unbeliever! Thank you so much for this revealing review!
I marvel at the universe and all that has been created. Everything is so exquisitely complex, and I often ponder, how can that be? All living things should be valued but the Creator himself, he my friend is elusive to me. Love your lines kitty. Much to think about.
Whatever you perceive your God to be is right.... there are no hard and fast rules in my book, we all of us thank God if we are humble people and that is all that matters :)
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
Good to see you on page Stella Thanks. Been trying to get this concept across to so many. Have a gr.. read moreGood to see you on page Stella Thanks. Been trying to get this concept across to so many. Have a great weekend. ...and wrap up warm. Came out from the cold and felt the warmth enfold me.
5 Years Ago
First time out for 4 days for me lol,the fresh air was lovely but i was very careful not to fall ..
5 Years Ago
Jack Frost is doing a walkabout here in the Midlands. Keep your feet firmly on the ground. Enjoy Sun.. read moreJack Frost is doing a walkabout here in the Midlands. Keep your feet firmly on the ground. Enjoy Sunday
5 Years Ago
Thank yiu Kitty ... family visiting this morning x
5 Years Ago
Hope you had a wonderful time!
5 Years Ago
i did kitty thank you, hope to be moving nearer to them later this year, although it isn't that far .. read morei did kitty thank you, hope to be moving nearer to them later this year, although it isn't that far i will be able to see the children most days ..
well yes, but where i have lived for many years has become almost like a foreign country and i don't.. read morewell yes, but where i have lived for many years has become almost like a foreign country and i don't know wmy neighbours anymore, the community spirit is long gone. He lives in a small town and all the people are so friendly . still stand and chat on the pavement and no knife crime etc... so it is for the good ... i have to have cctv cameras all around my house where i am now as a deterrent.
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Sounds like the 'Brum" I knew in the 60s. Dont blame you for wanting to move to a place that is safe.. read moreSounds like the 'Brum" I knew in the 60s. Dont blame you for wanting to move to a place that is safe and inspiring like Bexhill - on - Sea was for me. I have done the reverse to my detriment. good luck for the future!
As a writer, you got a point.. several very good ones actually.. and as an individual, in your own write, you make some good & interesting points too.... N
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
Having fun with my laptop...playing 'Dodgems'. Maybe its saying,'Go get your tea!" Got to first than.. read moreHaving fun with my laptop...playing 'Dodgems'. Maybe its saying,'Go get your tea!" Got to first thank you for this visit and wish U a gret week end.
Good words and thoughts shared. The below lines are long conversation if started.
"Be hungry for knowledge ... seek out the truth!
Question the origin, the creation of life-form.
The harsh effects of life on earth can be baffleing
to those who do not believe in the miracle of life."
I agree with both. Life is steady learning and not accepting miracles when nature show-us every day. A apple, a miracle. Thank you kitty for sharing your amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote
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5 Years Ago
Each day is considered a bonus to me in learning of our amazing creatio/existence on planst earth. I.. read moreEach day is considered a bonus to me in learning of our amazing creatio/existence on planst earth. I acknowledge that there must be a begining and therefore an end ~ of which I am totally accepting. Thank you for your wonderful insight my dear 'friend'. Have a lovely day.
wonderfully written dear Kitty, and You brilliantly spotted on the reals to pave the way for light to come across Your words, step by step, from the confusions into the solutions, from the wise spiritual You, I wouldn't expect less! of course Your last verse is the best, speaking the ultimate continuing truth, lighting faith and hope firmly. this world needs more persons like You*
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Funny you should say this. My son has said the God might be a 'she'! The unbeliever! Thank you so mu.. read moreFunny you should say this. My son has said the God might be a 'she'! The unbeliever! Thank you so much for this revealing review!
i really like your poetry kitty.
this poem makes a statement in the first line, and then the lines follow on with explanations.
wonderful!
i had never thought of having line numbers variations in a stanza.
cheerio carola
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6 Years Ago
Thank you so much for visiting with a lovely review. I value feedback. Just a humble yet untrained, .. read moreThank you so much for visiting with a lovely review. I value feedback. Just a humble yet untrained, aspiring poet. I too am accepting of new forms.
Mature writer. Would like to explore the possibility of posting small humble pieces on this site. Have self published and am seeking further advancement of of recent creations. more..