IT FLIES!

IT FLIES!

A Poem by kitty
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On a quiet summers' day... a sight in the sky.

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                             IT FLIES !!!
Alone am I...visioned in the clear blue sky
As birds and fluffy clouds pass me by.
I zing and I buzz ...wind takes me high
a tug and a pull is what it needs to make me fly!
Attraction is drawn to the sounds I make
'Selfies' are needed - these I cannot take.
Just a simple contraption - bone, frame and tails
Beauty to the eye in unmarked trails.
Bamboo sticks for body - light on windiest day
Bright tissue paper in skillful array
Airborne I glide as boys - and girls come out to play.
No internet to distract - winds are at their strongest today.
Zing, zing here I go again ~ happy and carefree
No one up here to capture or dare bother me
Sun above my head *** ^***
I'll fly and fly till it's time to go to bed.
Created @ 4.PM  May 2016

© 2018 kitty


Author's Note

kitty
Without the title could you have gussed what the writer was referring to?

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were You a bee dear Kitty, a dragonfly, butterfly, a small bird or maybe a kite? because I too was one of them flying with You, happy and carefree, You are the best in writing the uplifting sweetest poems, I always feel the positive joyous energy though Your words, and no exception in this wonderfully amazing dreamy write. THANK YOU*

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Kite flying, wonderfully uplifting. Even writing about it does that to your reader. Yes, I knew you were writing about kites, because I used to fly them years ago with my siblings. What fun we had, watching them in the freedom of the skies, willing them to stay up, when the wind wasn't helping.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

6 Years Ago

I too have had so much fun passing on the techniques of kite making to my children, as handed down b.. read more
Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

That it very true.
You are definitely not a Kite Kitty even though your "Kitty" title is almost there. As I remember Kites were controlled by us young-un's and I can't imagine you being controlled by anyone. Very thought provoking piece my Lovely. Allways good to read your work and I hope I can carry on reading. Take care Rod.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yes, a kite...but i like this...imagining the thoughts that would go through the mind of this toy as it hovers high in the air.
nicely done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Jacob: Oh to be young and carefree again! The Kite could tell a tale or two eh!
were You a bee dear Kitty, a dragonfly, butterfly, a small bird or maybe a kite? because I too was one of them flying with You, happy and carefree, You are the best in writing the uplifting sweetest poems, I always feel the positive joyous energy though Your words, and no exception in this wonderfully amazing dreamy write. THANK YOU*

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes i knew straight away wht it was very lovely poem
i enjoyed this immensely thanks

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

6 Years Ago

Well observed! You too must have had fun doing 'fun' things as a child! Thank you for reviewing
Childhood days are back it seems. Airborne, fly, sun, winds, No internet to distract...
Wishing for a time to get back in life! Amazing poem kitty.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Writer at last! Sky ~

6 Years Ago

Kitty you doing 'boy' things must be really funny lol but seriously, you really brought back some me.. read more
kitty

6 Years Ago

Everything accredited to boys...Cowboys and Ind.. Making and flying kites, playing marbles, climbing.. read more
Writer at last! Sky ~

6 Years Ago

Ah! words are very descriptive now....lol

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Bexhill on Sea, East Sussex, United Kingdom



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