IDYLLIC

IDYLLIC

A Poem by kitty
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Inspired by the 'Railway Children'

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                      IDYLLIC ...
the countryside ...
idyllic the ride ...
down country lanes ..
in admiration of everything ~ with pride!
Streams a racing by ...
sun shining on you and I ...
little bunnies hopping in joy - fun to hide!
Memories come flooding in >>>
of pride as as a train thunder down the track
happier days ~ are back!
Relaxed are the buttercups as they sway in the breeze
birds twitter as they dance through the trees!
Where are the good old days ...
where is the gratitude we show in life ...
midst all the trouble, pain and strife?
Country folk there ~  will please:
enough laughter to put the mind at ease.
Daisies are there to meet you, 
dandelions to greet you,
in this "Idyllic" country setting
where bluebells grow  ...
mongst spikes of grass on show!
Created @ 9.45AM on Saturday 5th May 2018 

© 2018 kitty


Author's Note

kitty
Inspired by the TV showing of 'The Railway Children'

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How did I miss this Kitty, I don't seem to get Writer'sCafe in the right order. Maybe i am thick but trying to get work to read is causing me problems, anyway, enough of that. I loved this piece as it took me through Spring, Summer and half way to autumn. It is the time of year to witness dandelions and other Mother nature presentations. Good to read and looking forward to more. thanks for sharing my lovely. Rod.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

6 Years Ago

Like you Rod I find WN easier to get round but at least we are keeping the 'ink' flowing on here. Th.. read more
matelotrod

6 Years Ago

Age takes no prisoners Kitty but I will never see you as "aging" so growing old will not apply !
kitty

6 Years Ago

YOU have made my day kind friend!



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Though I've never seen this show before, this piece is like a breath of fresh air. I'm instantly thrown into memories of riding down the country side in family's truck with my head out of the window. My eyes are closed and I'm inhaling the summer's air, with a smile. Looking around, I see plots of flowers, farming lands,and even smell the ocean waters in the air. This piece takes me back to those precious moments. This reminds me of simpler times earlier in life that we forget about. Loved this. Great read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for visiting. Glad I could take you down memory lane to enjoy the freedom that nat.. read more
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Gee
Man, haven't seen that film in many a year. (Is there 2 L 's in idyllic ??)
Anyway enjoyed my flying visit Kitty.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

6 Years Ago

I believe there is, thanks. Miss the 'spell check' option on this site. Thanks for spotting it and f.. read more
How did I miss this Kitty, I don't seem to get Writer'sCafe in the right order. Maybe i am thick but trying to get work to read is causing me problems, anyway, enough of that. I loved this piece as it took me through Spring, Summer and half way to autumn. It is the time of year to witness dandelions and other Mother nature presentations. Good to read and looking forward to more. thanks for sharing my lovely. Rod.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

6 Years Ago

Like you Rod I find WN easier to get round but at least we are keeping the 'ink' flowing on here. Th.. read more
matelotrod

6 Years Ago

Age takes no prisoners Kitty but I will never see you as "aging" so growing old will not apply !
kitty

6 Years Ago

YOU have made my day kind friend!
How very sweet Your tune is dear Kitty, up lifting, hopeful and dreamy, and I could sense the pureness and energy of a child's spirit, Your words are fresh and calming, we need this in our troubled world, thank You my lovely friend.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for this visit with lovely remarks.Hope you are OK

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kitty

Bexhill on Sea, East Sussex, United Kingdom



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