SILENT TEARS

SILENT TEARS

A Poem by kitty
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Midst joy and sadnes we cry ~ Silent tears... over the things we cannot change but accept.

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                                SILENT TEARS
As time pases by ~ I cry,
when age and nature takes its course.
We live our lives in youthful days
always 'hip', following whatever craze.
Now as time goes on we realize ...
and recall the way it used to be ... 
                 was never utilize (d).
The chance to store and restore ~
the 'Paintings' we created in mind and
put value to ~ the da Vincis and the Monets
                  in our lives.
The seasons come and go >>>We plant seeds that
          grow and may flourish 
or be washed away by the tides and perish.
I say to the youth of today, "Make the most of life
life while you can, if you can because who knows
             what tomorrow will bring!"
Store up memories of happier brighter days
ones you can recall with joy in your heart ~
             without "Silent Tears".
Created @ 5.50 AM Saturday 18th November 2017

© 2017 kitty


Author's Note

kitty
Make good the joys of today.

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A nice parable.

Memories and time; forever symbiotic twins. Youth is for making the memories that we will cherish in our older age. But memories can also be created in days when we no longer think it possible. Young or old we must always be open to the experiences.

I enjoyed the message. Nice work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

kitty

7 Years Ago

I agree, we can still make lasting memories as time goes on but nostalgia is in the tried and tested.. read more



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I agree.
"Store up memories of happier brighter days
ones you can recall with joy in your heart ~
without "Silent Tears".
The above lines. My grandfather told me similar words often. We need memories. Thank you Kitty for sharing your amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

6 Years Ago

Your support is well appreciated. Thank you so much for visiting. Have a good day!
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

I enjoyed the poem and you are welcome.
i don't think youth really does make the best of now---and they will regret that in future....we may have made choices we wish had been different, because we have those "what if's" ---but we did make the most of our time, and need to remember that also.

i can feel this one deeply---lots of those memories...and the wondering...just one thing...second line i read the "it's" as "its"---

but yes. we need to store more happy memories than sad ones...or find some of the joy contained in the sad ones.

j.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

6 Years Ago

Thnak you so much J for pointing out that. Much appreciated review. Have a fabulous day!
An excellent message to savour & cherish life's gifts both in youth and beyond, lovely piece

Posted 6 Years Ago


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kitty

6 Years Ago

Thank you for visiting my humble page. The youth of today feel that they should be able to make thei.. read more
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Youth is spent doing quickly things we savour and take our time over as we age.
Nostalgia is always rose tinted.
Hi Kitty, enjoyed the read.


Posted 7 Years Ago


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A nice parable.

Memories and time; forever symbiotic twins. Youth is for making the memories that we will cherish in our older age. But memories can also be created in days when we no longer think it possible. Young or old we must always be open to the experiences.

I enjoyed the message. Nice work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

kitty

7 Years Ago

I agree, we can still make lasting memories as time goes on but nostalgia is in the tried and tested.. read more
Who said youth was wasted on the young.
I suppose when you're young, you're making the memories. But I suppose time changes all that.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

7 Years Ago

Thank you for dropping by and reviewing. Yes you are right memories will continue to stay with us.
Very emotional and touching. The title seems to be very perfect for the prose.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Writer at last! Sky ~

7 Years Ago

Wonderful Recipe of life. I'll make a note of it. Thanks :)
kitty

7 Years Ago

Love your approach. Good day to you!
Writer at last! Sky ~

7 Years Ago

Thanks friend :) wishing you the same!
Couldn't agree more my Lovely, I almost feel sorry for the youngsters who have to fight their way through what I see as a nightmare. We were lucky but then our young lives would not suit the youngsters of today. The last two stanzas sum it up perfectly. Well written, well rhymed and ver educational. thank you for sharing. Rod.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

7 Years Ago

Discussion recently over family meal was about how fortunate the kids of today are...in so many, man.. read more
Heart-touching, heartwarming with deep silent tears of gratitude and appreciation...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

7 Years Ago

No time to say,'If only'. We look back and think....Thanks for a lovely review my freind!

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Bexhill on Sea, East Sussex, United Kingdom



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