A THREE WAY THING

Trying my hand at something different.

A THREE WAY THING

You and Me

In vision I see, only You.

We both make One. True feelings we'll vent 

Striving always to be free.

We nestle up, cosey up: we are content.

~~~~***~~~~

Outside my window I see you

One mind, one heart, one soul in view.

One unity, one strength 

All powerful feelings we vent

Pooling our resources, we strive to be free!

Victory will come to you and me!

                                                                           ******************************

The sunrise in my life is when I see you

My feelings come to life and is aglow

The pounding of my heart drums up an instant melody.

I am alive and as these feelings grow

I shout out loud, "You are my sunrise and doesn't it show!"

<<<***>>>

Add another: it'll make three

Two is company ~ not three.

Bed gets crowded when there is three!

Ends in disharmony with too heavy a fee.

Created @ 8.30PM Monday 9th October 2017

                                                              

Author's Note

Done in 'Plain English' Designed for the busy reader.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really like this, but personal preference would be just the first three stanzas...i think that would work wonderfully...and three stanzas for the three-way thing. the 4th stanza seems out of place with the other three...but that is just one reader's opinion...

[kitty]

Many thanks Jacob for this feedback. Really do appreciate your opinion. Was content with the first three but mischievious 'Kitty" was prompted to add the fourth as a bit of fun. Our late Princess Diana (UK) referred to her husbands lover as the 'Third' person in their marriage!. I inject a bit of humor in some of my postings. Life is for living - with humor added to spice things up. Have a great day!

[Taino]

I really like your concept. By dividing the parts and then bringing them all together in the end really made an impact on me. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you.

[kitty]

Thank you for this lovely review. Added bit was through words spoken by a world famous lady now deceased.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I am really confused after reading this kitty. Though I'm a busy reader lol

[kitty]

Tea for two - happy - in love, someone else joins the party = three. That makes it a 'crowd'!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

"Wow" genius you are.....

[kitty]

Fact of life - three in a bed only works if you are into that sort of thing!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I agree........

[kitty]

Strange to find anyone these days who would agree on that point!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

You forgot? Gentleman.

[kitty]

I tip my hat to you!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I will always keep that with me. Its like an inspiration for me.

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Very creative form . I like how you make me read more then 3 times. Love and desire old themes of poems. I like your free verses running though my eyes .Beautiful imagines are in my head.

[kitty]

Thank you so much for this review and for your like of my humble verse.Have a marvelous week end

[aine]

I love the way it started.

[kitty]

Thanks for being appreciative of these humble words. Means a lot!

[aine]

You're most welcome

[Ashley]

Nice poem. I liked how you kind of explained the point under the title. I also enjoyed the rhyming parts. Keep up the good work!!

[kitty]

Thank you so much. Exploring the possibility of writing for those too busy to go into indepth/detailed writing and who like a 'quickie'.

[Ashley]

Your welcome!

[Ranger Kessel]

I am a structure guy so I love this. Layout is awesome. Do what you want and don't worry about anyone else. Best advice I can give you. Especially f you are holding back. No complaints here. This was a great write. Thanks for sharing!

[kitty]

Too often we live pleasing others and forget about ourselves. Thank you for this visit. Much appreciated!