THE HUMAN MIND

Unique in contents and structure. Mankind is doing its best to pattern its structure. Will that ever be?

                  THE HUMAN MIND

Most powerful of all creation

Intrinsically formed from time of conception.

Coherced, systematically trained - 

at mother's tender loving breast.

It goes through stages of integration

      into the world of acceptability.

Society takes the reins, mold and make us

conform, compartmentalize our own personality.

We choose the type of life we want or what we aspire to be.

This state of being determines the true function of the mind,

the most powerful and sometimes potent invention of morality.

Limitless bounds are in the formulation of feats and achievements.

Watch, observe and reason at this wonderful masterpiece,

question it's formulation and the greatness of it's creator.

We have minds ~ minds to question and reason 

       about our purpose here on this earth:

the aims we have in view -~ the chances we get

   to re construct or start our lives anew>>>

in spite of the adversites we face in daily lives!

Created @ 9.15AM Sat. 8th June 2013

Author's Note

Searched the archives and came across this 'oldie'

Reviews

[lightsong]

Kitty my dear thank You SO much for sharing this magnificent oldie with us! I respect You greatly for the many of subjects and problems You express and speak of so wisely, not like me writing mostly of love lol, I believe in the power of our minds, and believe in the determined practicing and training, with keeping our patience along the road, the impossible turns into possible!

[kitty]

Thank you dear Little flower for your continued support through different stages in life. Life has its way of showing how resilient we can be when put to the test. I admire that in you dear feiend. Be safe.

[Ashley]

I agree with light's comment.

[kitty]

Thank you for this kind visit to my humble page. Life is for living ~ determind by the human mind. Live it in the best way you can. Have a wonderful day!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yet another "gem"
The Human Mind is really a big miracle in itself. Loved the way you poured the words.

[kitty]

Was more focussed when I wrote that piece but now I produce only whimsical writes.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Even now you write wonderful. I have reviewed few.

[kitty]

I am highly honoured.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Pleasure all mine :)

[Ashley]

Awesome poem! I don't think I can express how great the poem was like other well written comments, but I liked it. lol :)

[Tom]

A blast from the past and a very cerebrally penned piece of poetry it is, yes indeed, the human brain is the one organ that even the most eminent scientists have barely scratched the surface of, and indeed, so much still remains vast enigma of uncharted territory!

A thoughtfully penned, cognitively philosophical poem!

[kitty]

Always has been a 'puzzler'! Thank you so much for your observation of this simple piece.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a good one it is...reminds me of the Amboy Dukes' song, "journey to the center of the mind"---

this works so well, in fact.
the construction of and deconstruction of...

[kitty]

Thank you Jacob for this lovely review. Always marveled at its uniqueness. Have a great day!

[John the Baptist]

Very thoughtful offering, Kitty. I especially like the concept that although society tries to mold us, we ultimately still have freedom of choice. Good work.

PS: Do a spellcheck on the first word of verse 2.

[kitty]

Well spotted. Thanks but this site doesnt seem to underline typos in red. Can't seem to find the correct spelling. Best advice. Don't mind your doing so. Thanks

[John the Baptist]

Understanding that US and UK spellings of the same word can be different, I have always spelled it "coerced."

[kitty]

Thank you. I will take note.

[Carola]

hi kitty,
i love your very creative poem and the concept. there are many points to ponder on, and your choice of words are wonderful.
cheerio carola, (another mature writer)

[kitty]

Pleased that you could drop by and give me your valued opinion, Carola. Enjoy your day. Thank you!