ON A CLEAR DAY

ON A CLEAR DAY

A Poem by kitty
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Pensive thoughts from inland looking out to sea.

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                                   ON A CLEAR DAY
Waters wash the waiting sands
Welcome news from far off lands.
News of anxious days to come
Mariner's delight now they are safely home.
               
"Wait my dearest......
till the red sun kisses the sea ~ think of me!
Can we ever justify this fatuous reasoning?
Minds once met in unison across the tides
Eruption of thoughts that crave fusion <*>
         a rare and special thing!
Like waves crashing 'gainst hardest rocks>>>
           beating inside the inner core ***
             passion craving for release!
Clear blue skies from highest heavens ...
orchestrate a grandoise vision of fun filled
             frolicks on the shore.
But be warned, they say ~ love makes the 
      wisest woman a fool ...
for the greatest thing you can learn is that
love is desirable only when one can love 
            and be loved in return.
On a clear day thoughts run through the mind
  but how distant are the  thoughts? ...
      would that they be of similiar kind!
Created @ 12.45PM Tuesday 5th September 2017

© 2017 kitty


Author's Note

kitty
Looking out to sea with pensive thoughts.

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Was in part inspired by an old seafearer on WN who won't 'come over' to WCafe. Also a passing view on TV of a storm. Seagulls in the background has enhanced the feeling of loneliness while looking out to sea... from which inspiration emerges. Thank U so much for this review. Funny what prompts one!

Posted 7 Years Ago


When it comes for You and Nature, You are great at bonding with her, and You know how to do so, turning it to sincere feelings touching us deep, Your soft sad tune, that yearning wistfulness through Your words, hold a gentle tear in Your heart, I think it's the first time I felt this heart of Yours like here, holding a tear, so gently and so real, I pray his thoughts to be so very close to Yours sweet Kitty, my loving friend*

Posted 7 Years Ago



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kitty

Bexhill on Sea, East Sussex, United Kingdom



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