Surreal Sun

Surreal Sun

A Poem by Maya
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A dreamlike sequence

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Naked Japanese women are holding
Torches near the lake.

The ghost of their skin is swimming

In the water-glass.

The smoke is shouting from far away,

But the flowers cannot hear it.

The naked Japanese women’s dance

Rises above the trees,

Praising the sun.

© 2017 Maya


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I like this Maya. Keep it up

Posted 7 Years Ago


Was this part of a dream? I'm a big fan of the imagery here :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Added on April 23, 2017
Last Updated on April 23, 2017
Tags: dream, sun, fire, dance, lake

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