Five senses

 

Scent, touch, taste, and sound,

my mind's awareness reaches round

the swirling chaos where we exist;

guiding life through order to resist

that dying movement we each explore,

to open up that other door

to a space and time

where we'll be joined

to life, to god,

to trees of patterns

spiraling out,

then spiraling in

searching for where we begin...

we'll find our Alpha,

we'll find Omega,

we'll find another way

to see that we here

are all together

for all eternity...

Reviews

[emmajoy]

' to open up that other door to a space and time where we'll be joined to life, to god, to trees of patterns spiraling out, then spiraling insearching for where we begin...'

such passion, such a search..

thank you for sharing..

[Lady Insomnia]

Love the Imagery. Love how it all flows.

[Constance]

It's interesting the way you begin with rhyme, then spill out into free verse. I love the flow and the sentiment here. After I read your other poem, I had to read more. You've got talent, Mr. :)

[Marilyn My Bitterness]

Great flow to the poem. Easy on the tongue and on the eyes. Amazing imagery. It really paints a clear picture for the reader. Good work!

[matt]

great use of words and imagery. really paints a picture!