I thank the Lord in Heaven for creating the female form. Her curves that entice you and heat that keeps you warm. The sensibility of the feminine that pulls the masculine man in. Her rapturous surrender that makes a fool out of men. Her lips that taste of the forbidden. The tingle of her touch. Eyes that beckon you closer and tighten when ecstasy is too much. Her strength gives you power. Her love feeds your soul. She is that pivotal validation that gives your masculinity its role. She has mountains and deep valleys; geysers waiting to erupt in joy. Her exploration transforms us into men; educating the curious boy. We live and grow inside her. A woman is the matriarch of all life. Our minds long to return to her so we chose another one as our wife. She is a creature of love with warmth to hold onto through the night. Holding her gives us comfort. We feel that everything will be alright. There are few things more precious than the majestic female soul. Her form may give a man comfort but her spirit makes him whole.
You certainly said it! We're all born a little different, but it seems that you' and I are the same in our praise of and attraction to women. Old and long married now, I recall being flattened by a girl's mere glance my way.
"She is that pivotal validation that gives your masculinity its role." Man, that line hit me like a truck! A woman's importance should never be understated... awesome piece.
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Thank you! I wrote this some time ago but I wanted to post it for Woman's Day.
Wow. I have never read such wonderful poem on a woman. Your poem makes every woman feel proud and leaves them in tears. I am glad I came across this as it is written by a very fine poet who is a gentleman.
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Thank you for your kind words. I tried to create a honest poem that gives substance to the gifts of.. read moreThank you for your kind words. I tried to create a honest poem that gives substance to the gifts of a female.
6 Years Ago
You did that wonderfully well. You are most welcome.
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