FROZEN HEART

FROZEN HEART

A Poem by Eddie Phillips
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Inside this emotionally frozen tundra; beats my alienated heart Isolated and frustrated, it grew tired of love’s false starts

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Inside this emotionally frozen tundra; beats my alienated heart 
Isolated and frustrated, it grew tired of love’s false starts 
Exhausted from the fruitless revving; my engine needed a jump 
Just a little something to keep it warm; it just wanted a little bump 
See my past was an icy abandon; it refused to let me go 
So I found myself taking comfort in any bed outside the snow 
I was not proud of my choices but they helped me to survive  
Those lovers were just warm comforts that helped me feel alive 
Flash-frozen and heartbroken, I always longed to see the Sun 
I am tired of this petrified existence; my heart is searching to find someone 
I want to be their blossoming flower, living and basking in their radiant light 
Snuggling inside the warmth of their arms as we lay enlaced at night 
My heart will no longer be frozen; it will find love anew 
I will live in the heat of their passion, warmed by a love that is forever true 

© 2012 Eddie Phillips

© 2014 Eddie Phillips


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Very well written piece man. I believe at one point in every persons life our Heart is frozen. Whether it be from a past relationship or just scared of being broken. And your right in the heat of the moment a human will seek comfort in the arms of someone. lol I think it's the way we're wired.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Eddie Phillips

11 Years Ago

I agree with you. It is not uncommon to seek the heat of a fire just to stay warm. Thanks for read.. read more



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Verrrry good piece I thoroughly enjoyed reading...and remembering vaguely, that dusty road traveled.
Can't tell you how cool it is to see such essence from another male, the rarity...

Awesome work, Eddie, keep it up!

Posted 11 Years Ago


i feel like the girl in the story Eddie

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eddie Phillips

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and connecting with this story. It is a story more common then we know. I tr.. read more
imiey

11 Years Ago

you much welcomed
Very well written piece man. I believe at one point in every persons life our Heart is frozen. Whether it be from a past relationship or just scared of being broken. And your right in the heat of the moment a human will seek comfort in the arms of someone. lol I think it's the way we're wired.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eddie Phillips

11 Years Ago

I agree with you. It is not uncommon to seek the heat of a fire just to stay warm. Thanks for read.. read more
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Good write, thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eddie Phillips

11 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by to read it.
Great poem Eddie. It is definitely hard being single going through person after person without finding the right one. I totally relate. Very romantic write. I especially like the last line it's very beautiful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eddie Phillips

11 Years Ago

Thank you for that kind review. I am glad you enjoyed this poem.
A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eddie Phillips

11 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by to read
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
This is just so beautiful. Your words really touch the heart. Such an emotionally powerful piece. I truly enjoyed :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eddie Phillips

11 Years Ago

Aw thank you. This poem is a truthful look at how people accept comfort for love. Yet we all event.. read more
i guess you heart is warm enough to melt the ice, from others heart.......
splendid!(we dont even need to say)

thanks for this "human heart candy", coated with thoughtfulness and love and care and love to dare.........




Posted 11 Years Ago


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Eddie Phillips

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and leaving a comment
Laminators Dubai

11 Years Ago

come on!
we glad by reading you......
Laminators Dubai

11 Years Ago

come on!
we glad by reading you......

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Eddie Phillips
Eddie Phillips

Denver, CO



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Writer, Scholar, Martial Artist, Poet, etc. I write everything. Whatever is on my heart comes through my pen. I do not limit myself to only write what I think. I write what I feel. I write a lot .. more..

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