I NEED YOU

I NEED YOU

A Poem by Eddie Phillips
"

Love is Eternal

"



When the Sun sets and skies go black: 

"I need you." 

When the tides change and no one has my back: 

"I need you." 

When joy is frozen by life's bitter cold: 

"I need you." 

When love is lost and lust is bold: 

"I need you." 

When every day becomes a losing fight: 

"I need you." 

Your soft whisper that said "It's alright" 

"I need you." 

I sit here in tears lost and alone 
Placing flowers on your cold grave stone 
Whispering softly: “I need you." 

© 2013 Eddie Phillips

© 2014 Eddie Phillips


Author's Note

Eddie Phillips
I wrote this poem a few years ago and just found it. It is a very simple poem. I posted it because it has a good message.

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A very emotional poem. Simple can be very powerful. The metaphors every other line are very well crafted. Great write! You have a talent!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Eddie Phillips
Eddie Phillips

Denver, CO



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Writer, Scholar, Martial Artist, Poet, etc. I write everything. Whatever is on my heart comes through my pen. I do not limit myself to only write what I think. I write what I feel. I write a lot .. more..

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