UNISON

 

 

Make me scream your name she said
As I tapped to the inner pulse of her love
Our carnal ravishment shook the weakened bed
She screamed my name to the Heavens above

 

Along with her decrees of elation
I felt the heat from her skins sweet embrace
As her nails pulled me into her rhythm
Joyful tears ran softly down her face

 

Our exultation was a burning inferno
I danced in the flames of my beloved
We were united in our primal syncopation
Our bodies bounding into each others love

 

We screamed our ecstasy in unison
Two voices, two names, in shared bliss
Then I held my lover in sweet rapture
As she fell asleep in my arms after a kiss

 

© 2013 Eddie Phillips

Author's Note

I like to walk that fine line between erotic and romantic.

Reviews

[Constance Payne]

Very nicely written, leaves much to the internal movie that we develop as we read.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

This is a decent piece of eroticism, I like the classic feel on this piece, even it has an adult material but you manage to express in a stunning manner that classified this piece as decent classic feel. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem.